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Thursday 18 April 2013

The Easter Bunny


He woke up with a big smile happy to see the Easter bunny knocking on his window. His father dressed up into a Easter bunny suit every year trying to make his children surprised to see a real bunny knocking on James and Lisa’s window and this time he’d done it.


James opened the window and asked his father where he got his suit from but he didn't answer and he wouldn’t come inside. Instead he started  hopping around and making big giant rabbit holes everywhere! He had a weird feeling about his father as he finished his breakfast.  His mother stood eyes wide open and she looked at her garden, she  couldn’t believe what she was looking at.  The garden was a mess and a  giant bunny busily made holes in her garden, James little sister Lisa was a little frightened and cried out “There’s a giant white thing in our backyard”.


James felt very curious when he saw  his own father stealing his wife’s carrot’s from the vege garden and stood mesmerized as he munched them up like an out of control  carrot eating machine. That’s when things got really weird  because his father came around the corner and the bunny went away.  The holes were gone and the garden was spotless. As soon as James heard the noise of a rabbit,  he ran upstairs and hid, crouched tightly in a corner of his wardrobe and waited. Then his father yelled out for Mum, Lisa and James to come down and look at something.

Once they got down they all told him everything about the Easter bunny ruining mum’s garden and making holes in the ground.  When they looked outside, right before their eyes there were hundred’s of easter eggs in the backyard.  At that moment  Lisa and James said simultaneously  “This is the best Easter Ever”.

1 comments:

Mrs Dines said...

Great work Erastus,your ideas can be clearly seen by your audience through the use of descriptive language, well done.

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